Can you comment on my essay please?

A Roman general brought peace to a rebellious province by killing all its citizens even his fellow Romans were shocked. One of them wrote, "In Latin (Solitudinem faciunt, pacem appellant) which means they create desolation and call it peace. Yemeni government implement the same ideology on the citizens of Yemen, but in this case not the rebellious, are revolutionists. Yesterday, an elderly woman knocked my door; she was asking for money in order to by shroud for her son, not food. She could not brie her son, and Yemenis face an abject poverty. Like that look in a mother's eyes when she can't feed her kids.